Writing a copy that doesn’t aim to sell?
A COPY WITH NO INTENTION TO SELL
I read Daniel H. Pink's - To sell is human this summer.
I find it particularly winning and a MUST read for all you copywriters out there.
He says there are 2 kinds of selling, but what his writing boils down to is that we all sell.
It's either selling a service or product for money or selling without closing a typical sale, where we nudge, convince, exert influence on someone to change his/her mind, to act in a definite way that would suit the opposite side or would benefit both parties.
The ed-med industry is mostly concerned with selling, although it is that second kind of selling, with no end purpose in achieving a profit.
COPY with a higher purpose
So, how come this copy is distancing itself from the purpose of selling?
the copy on the ABOUT US page of the Croatian cosmetics brand
The "I" in this copy is strong.
It acts as a claim and an explanation of a purpose of acting on the market (cosmetics industry). This "I"
wants to be useful, wants to educate and nudge people (beauty product buyers) to use products which not only maintain skin health, but also act benevolently towards nature and the planet.
The brand has a higher purpose, and such a purpose is getting more and more to the forefront of many brands in the coming.
Not just to sell, but nurture life, take steps against pollution, oppose testing on animals (hence
favouring cruelty-free practices) and be steadfast in using materials which are biodegradable and
recycleable.
But, are the first few sentences in the copy a clever tactic (if they can be considered a tactic at all)?
To do away with the imperative of selling, which is the only way for a brand to persist on the market and concentrate solely on education, enlightenment etc.?
I took that copy and decided to analyse it.
THE “I” SHIFTS TO “WE” in the COPY
Somewhere in the middle the copy includes "we" and shifts away from the "I" at the beginning.
So much, that the "I" disappears.
I thought that the "I" would continue, as I took the copy to be a confession.
the shift in the perspective in the copy on the ABOUT US page of the cosmetics brand
If the founder started with an "I", she could have finished the OUR STORY with it, and make a personal story out of it. Why she chose to develop the brand, what she was thinking when she decided to go into business etc...
So, the copy changes course.
Summary: Here you have read a copy which is not egoistic, and it directly says, that it doesn’t aim to sell. I found it awkward, that’s why I shared it here and wrote about it, analysing it for you to see how different it is.